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Re: The Magic of Chocolate: (chapter 6) A Criminal Reunion
that was "not a lot of grammar"??? I wonder what it'd be like to have a lot grammar problems.... lol hmm, you're right about descriptions for his brother, I totally ...
Jan 26, 2008 -
Re: Football: the Pains and Joys
Okay, thanks...yeah, I should've put the "old man" parts in italics. i guess i'll fix that in word.... thanks for reading!
Jan 26, 2008 -
Re: Around This Wooden Table
ok, thanks...next time i'll look for that forum so that i can post it there to start with...
Jan 26, 2008 -
Re: Willie the Goldfish
haha, great comment! lolol... hey, here's a really weird and stupid haiku... that rhymes! lol Haiku de Chip Why would you want those, When you get Ranch Doritos, And/or corn ...
Jan 26, 2008 -
Re: Football: the Pains and Joys
If you don't have anything to comment on the story, please don't post. It really isn't that long, compared to some of the stuff on here. And it's not that ...
Jan 26, 2008 -
Re: Football: the Pains and Joys
Even if you don't like football, this is kind of more like a moral story than a total sports story.... I rated it PG-13 because the guy gets injured and ...
Jan 26, 2008 -
Re: In the Land of the Purple Monkeys
w00t!!! you win!!! haha...yeah, "Striped Ones" was the clue. i forgot to post the "creature challenge" as I'm calling it, in the first post. lol, congrats. Teh Wozzinator
Jan 25, 2008 -
Re: In the Land of the Purple Monkeys
Actually, I was going to see if you could guess what the stranger was. There's really only one good clue, but it also hints at it from his description and ...
Jan 25, 2008 -
Re: The Fivefold Road
my edits and comments are in bold The Fivefold Road Prologue, Roedra cast a glance behind her, steel grey eyes flickering over the men that trailed her. They were sullen, ...
Jan 25, 2008 -
Re: My Sister
Edits and comments in bold My Sister I have a sister I have known her I think that it would flow better if you got rid of the her since ...
Jan 25, 2008 -
Re: The Magic of Chocolate: (chapter 2) The Drop of a Pen
Thanks Sumi... No, the "young'n" isn't a clone. lol! Teh Wozzinator
Jan 25, 2008 -
Re: Willie the Goldfish
haha, it wasn't really made for teens, and it was more for a little kids type theme. but i thought i'd post it anyways since it's one of the few ...
Jan 25, 2008 -
Re: In the Land of the Purple Monkeys
Ok, sorry...I don't remember that rule on the rule list...but there were a lot. I'll have to check that out again. Sorry! I guess I just wanted to post because... ...
Jan 25, 2008 -
Re: The Magic of Chocolate: (chapter 6) A Criminal Reunion
This is chapter six of "The Magic of Chocolate", so please read 1, 2, 3, 4, and 5 first (of course!! lol). Enjoy: Six A Criminal Reunion Dante sat on ...
Jan 24, 2008 -
Re: Willie the Goldfish
I have no fish, let alone a goldfish named Willie, it's all made up. The second was created first, when I made up something to go with the tune because ...
Jan 24, 2008
